Forgiveness

by Tess   Oct 21, 2005


Are you asking for forgiveness?
Do you want another go?
To win my heart once over
And never let me go
I want to see the trust
That you say you can give
But not once have you proved yourself
As someone who will live
To me you are a rebel
And sometimes you forget
That all I want from you
Is you to not neglect
So now I ask you over
Are you willing to love me?
With heart and soul, whatever
Do you lay your trust with me?

10/10/2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by JessicaaSlater

    I loved this poem. i can really relate to it.. i know a boy just like that. he's the boy i wrote all my older poems about.. but you really don't need boys like that im soo lucky to have moved on. anywho. grreat job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tasha

    Wow you were right. This is a really great poem. 5/5. Thanx bunches for the comment.
    xoxo
    Tasha

  • 18 years ago

    by The Depression Bard

    I really enjoyed this poem. It's a great realization to things goin on in my life.

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    This one is really good. Is it about a personal experievce or just a thought??

    Love Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aww hun dat was really gwd i enjoyed reading that one ... keep up the gwd work babe
    luv dia mwaz xoxox

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