Untitled (Title ideas please?)

by Tess   Dec 18, 2005


Tears of melted sorrow
I cried for times to heal
The pain of hollow grieving
That I could not conceal

Like roses that had wilted
No day could pass on by
The briefest shining beauty
Was not in sight to spy

Electric currents breeding
My blood boils with regret
A freaky messed up meaning
That I can not forget

Forever you reside
And in my heart; you dwell
My suicide complete
Released of living hell

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Wilted roses maybe?? I dont know sounds good to me. Great poem you show a lot of emotion and im proud to have you as one of my favs.
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca1111

    Wow...i...wow...lots of emotion...5/5 w/o a dought..i cant think of a title that would fit this...i think its fine the way it is...it leaves a little curiosity to it.

    much love,
    becca

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    You could call it my hero my hell
    i dont know just a segustion
    love liz

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    OMG! This is really good...for the title you should go for one of the lines in your poem like
    Forever you reside
    But if you don't like it that kool. :) 5/5

    Mallori

  • 18 years ago

    by ANNA

    I liked it it made me think

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