Candle Of Death

by Lady Vengeance   Oct 22, 2005


Burn the candle to the wick
fleeting demons make me sick
Why do they ignore his rule?
to do right can be so cruel

i see this hollow, dark abuse
don't try and make up an excuse
the candle flickers, almost goes out
this fear i can do without

screams unheard will go ignored
"save me" i now begged my lord
the shimmering surface breaks
dragged down by all of my mistakes

lying at the oceans base
i can clearly see your face
i watch your smile begin to crack
walk away and don't look back

clawing at my last chance
above me drops of moonlight dance
if only i could lift my arms
i can't, the surface remains calm

i now will cry my last tear
and slowly watch it disappear
as it merges into my grave
i realise, i was your slave

surely now my flame has died
the candles wet from tears I've cried
never again will it light
candle of death, you've won this fight

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Such an outstanding poem. It truely is grand.

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    Really Dark, i love it, cept for the 2b2 rhyming, but i can live with it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    You dont need me to tell u how good you are... however i enjoy it. this is on eof my favoites. good work!!!

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Megzzy

    Wow this is so powerful im loving this more than anything i have ever read. so much beauty..

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Suzie you have made a boring computers lesson
    heaps worth going on the net
    keep it up it was so good
    im gonna read all the others now
    :)