Simple:Boredom::You:Pain

by Jamie   Oct 22, 2005


**For the title i wanna do something is to something as something is to something but not the words i used so ill find something else is you have any ideas thatd be great i know this poem id real simple but im bored!!!**

Of course, dont you agree?
That sometimes we just ache
Its cliche but we all know
That we learn from each mistake

But the mistake I made
Is over now, its done
How long must I suffer
From the time it all begun?

Im learning slowly
Mastering the art of being bored
I can sit contempt and kept
For hours with nothing to look toward

I have began to realize
That I have no ground below
Im free falling with the lessons
The ones that I already know

It seems there is no ending
Solace is but a myth
If comforts never coming
I dont want to live like this

And I have no proof, no scars
Just the tears bleeding from my eyes
So when I cry out for help
You assume my pains all lies

But Im not being artificial
I really do need a hand
And Ill redirect my screams
To get you to understand

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 again...btw thnx 4 commentin on my stuff..much appreciated. anyway...gr8 poem. good rhythm...all around good poem!
    ~me~

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    Very nice, you used words that are not common words but people still understand so is not overbearing
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Ah that is amazing. I look up to you r so much in your skills so much. This is another great poem really awesome. it's so sad because it's so true. I'll be yuo helping hand:P if ever you need though hun, seriously..just pm me or something k?! take care xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey thanks for the comment. It is a good piece, keep writing and your work is quite good! I love poems that are straight from the heart. Shows you how the person really feels. I'm feeling a little better today. :)