Can You Guess Who?

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Oct 23, 2005


This isn't a very good poem and it's kind of confusing, but can you figure out the sentence with the boys name in it?:

Illness so dreadful

Love so pure
On a sunny day
Velvet lights...
Endure:the beauty it may bring

Because of this
R we now over?
A beautied light, now
Disappeared
Live lonely in darkness
Even in mornings
You can't help

Sucked into this wretched curse
Kindled in this horrid light
In thou of what to be
Darkness...
More to come
Of this terrible curse
Rendered helpless
Everlasting horror is but to be left

*wow that was from the top of my head... and I read it over as I finished it.. wow... I'm so speechless... its horrible!!!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Betty Boop

    Nope it says........... I love Bradley Skidmpre..... I voted 5/5.... so i was the only one that voted..... it was on 0.0 till i voted..... feel free to read mine... and comment

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