My Life Is Like . . .

by Tess   Oct 23, 2005


My life is like a puppet
I move with no control
Left with complications
No way to break my fall
Each piece of me has shattered
Into its millionth piece
No way to rediscover
As deep down I just weep
My tears are not controlled now
Maybe they never were
These scars show how it is
To no longer have control
My life is like a puppet
But soon I will break free
I will live my life the way
That you taught me to see

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  • 18 years ago

    by Beebee

    Wow, great!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Another grrt one. cool metaphors and representation.

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Live the life that you want to live, there is nothing to hold you back.
    great poem to

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    So true.. i really loved the metaphor in this..its so smart...especially loved the first two lines!
    yeh go aussie land:P
    take care hun xoxo