Since you left

by Austin   Oct 24, 2005


I look at the sky
All the deep blues and greys
And wonder if that's you eyes
Looking down on me
Ever since that day
Things have never been the same
It's hard to move on without closure
But I try to go on without you
I try to live my life
But without you here to guide me
There's no reason to live
And I hope when you look down
From the glorious heaven your in
That things are better there
Because now all it does is rain
Now thigns are miserable here
Without you theres no light left
So I hope the streets of gold
Welcomed you with all their glory
Because nothing more than
Mud and rain can be seen here
Ever since you left

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  • 10 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awwww!!! i REALLY want6 to cry since it's really beautiful and sad the emotions are killin in this poem! :) great job! 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    That was so sad.. amazingly written, beautiful words.. and heart-breaking.. i especially loved ur last lines.. they wer reli gud... hope ur ok.. those wer some powerful words and emotions
    take care and stay smiling
    Nannoush

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    This is a sad poem but you wrote it well.
    The emotion is powerful and well expressed.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    A good poem with some strong emotions, remember to explore your ideas and check your spelling and grammar because you have a few mistakes through here. Keep going!

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    That is so sad. Your a great writer and I hope everything gets better for you. Keep you head up:)

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