Our Time

by BrokenMisery   Oct 25, 2005


Losing grip on broken reality,
capturing the souls of modern mortality.
Hungered hope plays in the time of our minds,
watching for weakness in Devil's divine.

Watching and waiting,
hungered and lost.
Time has left us stranded,
as our dreams pay the cost.

We're slipping away,
these tears strangle our souls.
Slipping away,
this world has turned so cold.
Slipping away,
as the storm fills broken hands;
capturing its time,
in the hourglass sand.

Caged in the boundaries of life's endeavor,
waiting for something in this forever.
The hands keep moving through the faces,
as each clock counts the time it erases.

...and we're slipping away,
these tears strangle our souls.
Slipping away,
this world has turned so cold.
Slipping away,
as the storm fills broken hands;
capturing its time,
in the hourglass sand.

Waiting for something that will never come;
watching the moments pass until our days are done.

Watching and waiting,
hungered and lost.
Time has left us stranded,
as our dreams pay the cost.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Fist of all let me congradulate you on another beautiful work of art . Besides two mistakes that I seen ( such as when you say capturing its time in the hour glass sands . It should be just sand, and when you say, the hands keeping moving through the faces . It should be , keep moving through the faces . ) Other then those simple mistakes that a lot of artist make, I have no choice but to say excellent, bravo, and wonderful . Because to me it was all those things and more . 5/5

    you're friend

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Clearly you're not only brilliant with verses, but a song writer too :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Babe dats awsum
    nice imagry aswell, worked well 4 ya
    luv ya heaps
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Great poem and amazingly well written. It strikes me all that much harder after recent events but it is still a fantastic work of art.