Stormy Weather

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Oct 26, 2005


The sky is dark as a shadow,
The flowers are closed in the meadow.
Rain pours down in pails,
The wind blows in powerful gales.

This of course is a metaphor,
To make you ask for more.
The rain is really tears,
From my sadness, my fears,

The flowers have died,
But, so have I, you LIED!
I admit I cried,
I know you tried.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    I don't think u need to improve ur writing u are perfect the way that u r....keep up the great work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    I like your writing style.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    Really good I like this one and *Friends Till the End* their both full of emotion. I love this part

    *This of course is a metaphor,
    To make you ask for more.
    The rain is really tears,
    From my sadness, my fears,*

    Its so perfect how you changed it, good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    Love the metaphors, they worked really well.

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Beautiful poem. It's wonderful, I can really relate to it too. 5/5

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