Wishing u & her the best

by Paige   Oct 27, 2005


I saw the way you looked at her
with that sparkle in your eye
and i wondered why you dumped me
the next day you said goodbye

You said you loved me!
but you left and went with her
I dont no what i did wrong
My head and hearts all a blur

Can you remember our 1st kiss
The 1st time our souls were entwined
it felt like it lasted forever
that kiss was the special kind

But obviously it didnt mean anything
i was just another girl
you didnt giv a stuff about me
now my lifes in a wirl

My whole lyf has changed
and now im all alone
i still think you care
i still wait by the phone

But then i suddenly realise
that you couldnt care less
so im saying goodbye
and wishing you and her the best

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lydia O

    I think this has the potential to be a very fine poem. But it needs some work to correct the spelling and language errors. I think it might be helpful for you to compose your poems in a word processor such as MS Word so that you get the benefit of the excellent spell checker that is included in that software.

    Sorry, I don't mean to be harsh. I'm really trying to be helpful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Very nice and touching poem !

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BrownEyedBabe

    OMG that was so...cute ur good at this kinda stuff i really liked that keep up tha good work...

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Wow sweetie that was realy good. I'm sorry that you are going through this but trust me this won't be your last heartbreak. You will find someone who actually cares about you. It may take time but you will. Everyone has a soulmate and you just haven't found yours yet. But keep looking. You will. Great poem by the way. Keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Awwww I'm sowwie.

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