Behind the note

by Eraklis   Nov 2, 2005

Take a step inside my mind
Twists and turns is what you'll find

A maze of pain that's trapped in vanity
Lost within my fading sanity

Jaded thoughts of suicide
The Reaper dances to my cries

One left spinning to the beat
The sharpen sickle, in skin deep

A one way ticket to the end
Not much longer now my friend

Take a seat, enjoy the ride
Time is up to run and hide

Go to sleep were about to begin
Please place your soul inside the bin

The world of sadness that you knew
Was a pleasant dream to what you'll go threw

The razors edge, a slice of delight
Screams and laughter welcome your flight

Descend to darkness ever more
Your wings are broken try and soar

Tare your skin and plant the seed
Crimson black is what you feed

Romeos bleeding he died in bed
Juliet shot him through the head

What is real and what is fake
A delusional mind will make mistakes

Pick a door, it's yours to choose
No matter what you decide, you lose

Your chamber ready, the throne well kept
Your eyes still bloodshot with sins you've wept

Is this the wish you tried to free?
Now you're lost to never be

A million miles to anywhere
Without a tongue to say your prayers.


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  • 15 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    Hey this is andy's mate Al. loved your poem man, its got good rythmn and rhyme. Andy recommended you and i'm glad he did.

  • 15 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    Hey man, u've been one of my faves for a while, and I just thought it was about time I commented on your poems. This is really, really good. Nice word choice, interesting and brilliant symbolism. your flow couldn't be better, and you rhyming is strong. Brilliant Job. WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE MORE?????? lol.


  • 15 years ago

    by tIrEd BoY wItH wIrEd EyEs

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  • 15 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

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