Words Of Hurt

by Lu   Nov 2, 2005


Beauty does not lay on just exterior skin
but deep inside of my heart beating , within

Beating my self esteem into the ground
in my desperate attempt to lose another pound

Cruel remarks how this person sees me
burning my heart to the second degree

He's just an old man , set in his way
being my elder, doesn't make it okay

Cruelty of words sharp as an attack
once in the air , can never be taken back

I once thought you were kind and sweet
how does a mean spirited heart even beat

In a matter of time , I will laugh in your face
I am not a quitter , I will not sink in your disgrace

You are only a customer , a meaningless part of my life
yet the sting of your remark , about cutting it off with a knife

I will lose the weight , in the end be the winner
doing it for me , now I'm sixteen pounds thinner

Forty-four more to go , my husband by my side
fueling my hunger with love , my devoted partner on the ride

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  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    Some people can be so cruel. You did a good job sweetie
    ~neens~

  • 18 years ago

    by melody eyes

    I would ov slapped him across the face, nice poem i loved it x x x remember your beutifool the way you are!!! Jessy

  • 18 years ago

    by shygirl

    No matter how a girl looks weight or hight she is pretty i am an over weight girl and i know how u feel about the jokes and giggles and hurt ful words ppl say but u have to think to ur self i dont need them and one day they will need me but i aint gonna be there..

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber

    Wow! my mom has been going on a diet and she's lost 35 pounds in like 3 months. she says hte slower the healthier. and you can do it too. my mom had cruel comments just as well but she made it through. and i know you will. don't ever give up!

    ~*amber
    P.s- she went on the south beach diet in case you're wondering.

  • 18 years ago

    by Shalkan

    Wow that is the most horrible thing i have ever heard. Not the poem that was great. What he said.

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