I Know The Value

by End Of Eternity   Nov 5, 2005


Morning arrives with the rising sun
wet throat of mine pointed on a gun
I know value of my life
I know how to survive
so I pulled the trigger
& I flied high

what a sweet feeling it is
to be behind shadows
hands of time just does not matter
fake tears of loved ones
promises to live along
I know value of truth
I know how to lie
so I close my eye
with a smile I kissed my life goodbye

sleeping tight six feet under
I think of you and die again
life was so kind to me
so kind to end this everlasting pain

creeping inside my shell
feel like a waste from hell
I sleep in my box
my life was just a hoax

I still miss you
right from the bottom of my dead heart
I know we will make it in our next life
as I know the value of trust
I know the value of love
and till you live your existing life
I will wait for you above

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Love poem? Very deep and dark emotion creep throughout this poem. I was heart broken reading this...I feel bad that you were feeling like this.

    sleeping tight six feet under
    I think of you and die again
    life was so kind to me
    so kind to end this everlasting pain

    Great job on portraying your feelings..Making your reader cry.
    Take Care
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I know the value of love
    and till you live your existing life
    I will wait for you above"

    Such a gorgeous ending.
    While i was reading i was trying to decide whether it should have been posted in the sad poem catagory..
    But when i read those last lines, i saw why it belonged here.
    Well done hun
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    A love poem that starts with a desire of death. Wow... only someone like you can pull such a thing like that. Absolutely breathtaking. Loved it.

    Lots of Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hi nitin
    one more nice poem from ur side. i know u love dark poems and u can write them well too. it had a pain in it.
    really i loved it. and ya thanks 4 commenting on most of my poems. well i dont write much but ur comments hav really encouraged me
    i will try 4 some more good work.
    take care
    bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by prateeksha

    Hey amazing.
    well i could really relate to those feelings... it just spoke the same language which poems and articles speak sometimes.

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