Plastic

by Jamie   Nov 5, 2005


**bullies..

You have to press hard
To cause her to bleed
When you're using plastic
Words to succeed

While the knifes in her hands
You hold the pressure
She falls with the words
As you cruelly assess her

You spit and you laugh
But she's got her head wrapped
In plastic she holds tight
Just to make sure she's trapped

With no escape to breath
Her mouth gives in and dies
She was already being choked
Choked by your own disguise

So vicious, you're her suicidal
Personality and you'll live with the guilt
You'll live with yourself forever
And now also with the grave that you built

She could only survive forever
You broke that word so in two
No she can't hold herself forever
And she got no help from you

And the smile she forced
Merged with your laughter
Bled into your cynicism
There's no happy ever after

Take her heart and charge it
The costs are so drastic
Her smile, your words
Cause of death all so plastic

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  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    You've lost me a couple of times in this poem, some part of the poem were too forced, and I know you have the capabilities to do better.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • Oh my god this is soooo good...keep up the great work...i just love the way that u write and tha way that u express urself....5/5 by the way

  • 18 years ago

    by marinecorps0405

    Amazing poem. its good to criticize yourself, but to say ur not a good poet is a drastic misevaluation on your part.
    u have some serious talent and u should continue writing. i give you a 5/5.
    great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Wow hun this is brilliant like basically all of your poems! i love how everything you write has meaning xox