So fast-ly

by Puerto_Rican_Chick   Nov 5, 2005


Darkness covers...
our land of doom...
we live for so short....
then gone so soon...
so fastly broken...
so fastly confused...
so fastly lost...
so fastly worn and abused...

my motive to go on
is lost, its lost.
my reason for living
is gone, its gone.
no satisfaction for this life
never came...
im so broken-hearted
am i to blame?

it is lyrics to a song i wrote.
i know it aint all that, but hit me up with a reply. thanxz

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  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow theses are really good lyrics for a song.. they are very meaningful.. they stand out and are powerful..great flow and very deep and dark keep it up=)

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    Thanxz much for reading my poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    We live for so short....
    then gone so soon...
    ^^^^That line is so true, I truly like it. U r a good poet keep out the good work.
    Juls

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