BROKEN

by myshiningstar14   Nov 6, 2005


The thought of loosing you, makes me shake with fear, the tears have become so intense, that i cannot stop shaking, and i can scarcely breath! I don't know what i did, but i need you...and i am so BROKEN.
With my shirt all wet with stains from my endless tears, i can't help but think of all you were to me. You brought me so much happiness, i can no longer bear the thought of being permanently separated. It makes me shake and shake, until i cant speak, my heart stops, and my body goes numb. I pray and pray this isn't the end..and that he will not take you away form me.
I will never forget you and from rainbow tears, to ebony tear drops...i shake and i scream! Clinging to the memories i have of us, and the way you made me feel inside. I once was broken, but now my feelings have subsided; and you were but a figment of my imagination, a castle in the sky!

**please comment** LISSA

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Nice job...just gotta start with those stanza's we got some hardcore critique ppl so..im just tryen to help you attract more readers..but the poem was nice really great 5/5
    ttyl somtetime
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by Aly

    Oh my gee! your so good! yeah for school we had to do a poem unit and i sent into the Celebration of Young Poets and my poem, Winter, got published...lol so did some other form my shcool...i think like 29 of us? o well! ttyl suger!! thanks for the comments!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    This is based on the time i almost thought i lost john as a friend...bc of sumthn he did i thought i was never gonna be able to talk to him again...and it hurt so i wrote this poem..i love him, so damn much adn i hope you all can tell even though you don't kno me. Lissa xox

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Awwesome hunn