Tears

by chasezvampire   Nov 9, 2005


Salty, for the emotions let out in your cries
abundant, for how many times you have been hurt.
never ending, to show how you long to let go.
threatening to kill your soul and become numb.
falling, to show your just a falling angel almost ready to be called back to paradise, just cry a little longer, the tears will soothe your angelic soul.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Ariana

    I think this would benefit from being put into stanzas more. However I quite like your choice of words, they fit in well. Also, it reads like a stream of thought and you haven't tried to force anything to rhyme, this really adds to the piece. By the way, 'your' should be 'you're' I think. Nice job :)

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