Falling

by Lyla   Nov 9, 2005


Living in a world of lies
Wishing I would just fall asleep and die
Hoping everyday that it will be my last
Trying to find comfort living in the past
Hated by everyone, Not worth a dime
Living my life should be a horrendous crime
Can't sleep well at night thinking of it all
I have dreams every night where all I do is fall
Falling, Falling not able to awake
Living in this cruel world is my only true mistake
Falling, Falling not wanting it to end
But for now all I can ever do is pretend
Pretend I am happy, Pretend I am smart
Yet I know inside it's tearing me apart
Maybe the only peace I will ever feel
Are those dreams of falling for they seem far too real
Falling and falling without a care in sight
Wondering if leaving this world would truly be right
So I struggle pretending every things OK
Only living for the dreams where I wish I was able to stay

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  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I kinda feel the same way too, I love this poem, well written, good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Wow great job Lyla :) I really liked these two lines:

    Hated by everyone, Not worth a dime
    Living my life should be a horrendous crime

    You have alot of talent and should be proud of yourself :D Thanks again for commenting on my poems, it means alot to me :)
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 18 years ago

    by William Sirett

    Hey Lyla,
    guess who it is,
    this poem is pretty good, but I think you should try a free verse poem for once, just rattle on a little bit. Read my poem for me, k, see how you like.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This poems very good. it flows very well. you often find that poems with this rhyme scheme sound quiet forced, but this flows very well.

    its very dark an datmospheric. i like it a lot

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    Great pom

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