Clouded Eyes

by Fallengod667   Nov 9, 2005


My soul burns,
With so much pain,
Seeing what,
My life became.

The fire turns,
My heart to ash,
See the horror,
Of my past.

I can tell,
Its warping me,
seeing all,
of my old deeds.

My body aged,
before its years,
seeing this,
brings me to tears.

No one should live,
With what i do,
See what my life
Has turned into.

My mind can see,
all of these things.
but if i saw,
it would kill me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    So vivid and full of utter emotion pretty good

  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    So vivid and full of utter emotion pretty good

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    I really cant describe how this poem was it truly was excellent. Your an original brilliant poet you should keep it up! Your one of my favorites now! I wish I could write like you! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I can't find the words to tell you how much I love this poem. I am very envious of the way you can express yourself. I love these lines:
    "The fire turns,
    My heart to ash"
    Again an amazing poem.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    That was another great poem. I was interested all the way through it. Keep em coming!

    Love Chantelle

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