Neverland

by Emily parsons   Nov 10, 2005


I held out my hand
Palm
Outstretched
Waiting for you to take me
Somewhere
Far fetched
Instead you look troubled
Shook up
Aghast
Choking on memories
Of your
Dim Past
So i painted a picture of us
You and
Me
We were something better
Perfect
Sweet
You grabbed onto my hand
Held on
Tight
Said you would love me, for the
Rest of
My life
But will the painting
Ever
Be real?
Or will it be destroyed
By how
We feel
I held out my hands
Fell to
The floor
Curled up in a ball
So you could hurt me
No more

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Wow,
    powerful words
    a dfinate 5/5
    ~Emma

  • 18 years ago

    by Dean Russell-Rands

    Nicely done emy - I'm running out of things to say OH what can i say? It's great 5/5 =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    OMG i love it emy... rah how brilliant ... very different aswell because of the layout

  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I really like this poem except it needs some commas and periods, that way people know when a sentence is ending and a new one begins, and of course it makes the reader pause and gives your poem a since of rhythm. Other then that good job!

    ~Megan~

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent ... touching.. !
    5/5
    love
    amy

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