The Death Of A Mind

by Anthony   Nov 11, 2005


Feeling sick,
Short of breath,
Insides churning,
Feels like death.

The cruelty of life,
Intensified by ten,
In the drowning of a body,
Not here, not now, not then.

Confusion and betrayal,
It all just seems so real,
Abandoned by a family,
The skin on an arm to peel.

Soon they will realize,
There is nothing left to find,
Only look through the ruins,
After the death of this boy's mind.

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  • 18 years ago

    by brown eyes and a melancholy smile

    Wow, brilliant piece of writing Anthony. You have a way for words, talent dude, you have talent

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Oh wow sweetie that was an AMAZING POEM! You had great dictions and it's flow was wonderful! You expressed you topic passionately and well. 5/5!

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    This is a wonderful poem, very nice. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by danielle

    Amazing poem....it felt like their was alot of thought go into it

  • 18 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    Wonderfully written, this is the kind of poetry that I love to read.. I hope you'll read some of mine and tell me what you thin.. 5/5 gj!

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