Sorry, Im In Love With You

by Syn   Nov 13, 2005


Some say it takes time to heal
this pain of love that i feel.
But thats not true, its just that,
this love filled me with everlasting bliss.

I suppose now that i get no love in return,
All i can do is sit here and urn.
This is in a word "true love , Unexplained.
The kind some say couldn't be obtained.

The words that explain my love for you,
don't exist , that much is true.
You, yourself chose to condescend,
And make your self nothing more then a friend.

Sadly i still sit here and for you defend.
Sadly my heart was true.
Sorry, I'm still in love with you.
Your the one for whom i would fight.
Every single day of my life.
You are what is right.

Yes, i know, your not my wife.
But, its for you id lose my life.
Its hard to believe you don't want anything to do with me.
And someday ill know, the reason why
You up and chose to give me a lie.

Was it really just all fake?
Were you just looking for a heart to take?
Have all the rumors come true?
Sorry, I'm in love with you.

-Syn

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, that was so sad and touching.
    if you really love her then aren't
    you happy when you see her happy
    even if she's with you or not?
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Keep holding on baby, keep holding on and talking about how you feel until you find some middle ground with you sorrow, some kind of peace. It will take a lot of time, and you may never get over her all the way, but you can learn how to keep moving. Good luck baby!

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Vickie

    I do not think this poem did you justice. It was confusing and sometimes you seemed to be at a loss for words. I think you are an excellent writer and if writing about this lost love is all you choose ot write about then you do that
    But Ashley Pierce doesn't seem to agree but I wouldn't worry about that b/c she is only 14 and probably cant relate quite yet and besides that I read some of her poems she doesn't have the experience or the talent to criticise ANYONE else.
    And if anyone has a problem with my comments feel FREE to let me know!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hello again, you're still on my favourites list, and I'm happy to say it. You're a talented writer and you always have a way of getting your feelings across nicely. In all truth's (this part is mostly for Ashley) I think getting over her is easier said than done, I myself am still getting over someone, and it's a long hard process - especially when you always thought that that person was the love of your life. I give you my sympathy, and I offer my condolences if ever you need them, don't worry bout what people say (especially when it's things like that) because it's clear to me that ashley must not have been so in love before... Anyway, lol before I say too much --- even though I think I already have --- I'm gonna leave with the last comment, that it was a great poem and I hope you always write and give me more things to read ;).

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thats really sweet, its sweet in a lovely confusing way. The second line doesnt fit the rhyming pattern which was annoying at first but then the whole poem morphs, i still like it because its how i would like to write my poems but dare not to attempt. Great job, great style.

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