Lovesick Father

by myshiningstar14   Nov 13, 2005


Tears roll down His porcelain cheeks, pain staining His awestruck complexion. Living hate, riotous fights, and never ending pain surround His every will. He looks upon us with a sad face, a face of hurt and pain. Where has that love gone? The love I sent so long ago?
And as He wipes away those pain stricken tear drops, He bows His head once more. He is sick, sick of this loveless world He's in. Why aren't we being who He wants us to be?
We've abandoned Him, and yet still His loves reigns; but inch by inch our love withers away. We slowly have become without love, and He has become our Lovesick Father.

**please comment** Lissa xox

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Excellent Title Excellent Poem..Flat Out Excellent..nice detail too....Great job 5/5
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Seriously?> this is one of my least favorites lol to tell you the truth..i mean its godo btu not my favorite..but i am flattered! thanxs aaron! mwah! lol *lissa*

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    This is my favourite poem you have written. i am so jelous of your tallent

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