You've won

by aaron c s   Nov 13, 2005


Another fight tears us apart.
Not wanting to talk,
Or have a heart to heart,
Mean words were said, that i don't regret.
But I'm sure later I'll be sorry,
And the bruises I'll never forget.
You've never hit me in the face before.
You said too many people would see.
That didn't stop you this time, for sure.
You eyes were ice cold.
Your hits were hard as rock.
But I still stood there trying to be bold.
The anger we have toward each other,
The anger that causes all the hurt,
Is the anger that will be there forever.
I will never forgive you for what you have done,
Cause I'll always have the memories, from the scars
You'll keep hitting, I'll keep bleeding
You've won

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    Gr8 poem hun but they never win keep ur head up high and keep fightin for what u wnt!!! xxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    The poems great really well written and expressive

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Let the feelings out great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    This is also a great poem, add punctuation tho, it helps the reader know how you feel more. Because it shows the speed in which it is supposed to be read!!
    XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    Now that poem was powerful! I am blown away by it! They only thing I can say is to try and use more commas and periods other then that... it was truly amazing! That opening line
    *Another fight tears us apart
    Not wanting to talk
    Or have a heart to heart*
    That is so powerful! I love that part=) great job!

    And thank you for your comments on my poems. I am also very Appreciative with ur comment on *For those who think they know love…* u rated it for the poem even though u didn’t agree with it, and I admire that=)

    ~Megan~

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