Where do I go?

by AnCi   Nov 14, 2005


Never in my wildest dreams
I thought that I would understand
what my life would be without you,
without the touch of your hand.
And now when you are gone
I don't want to live this life,
it feels like my heart has been cut
with a hundred stabbing knives.
I tried to run from all the tears and pain
but I just realized that I've been trying in vain.
'Cause when I turn right I see no reason to be,
when I turn left I see only sadness for me,
when I step forward I see pain and sorrow
And when i take a step back i see no hope for a better tomorrow.
So please somebody tell me...
...where do i go?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    You really want a place to run ?? from what? you want to run from a feeling and a pain inside of you , dose it matter where you are !! will they stop if there is another place?
    ^_^

    i think i have a bit of a pointer here , maybe spliting the poem into stanzas would help the reader a bit , a whole block of lines might make the reader eye abit refusing to read!.

    love is awful when we get hurt sint it ? but is it love mistake ,love is only a feeling . but in the wrong lovers hands it can hurt a bunch,!!^_^

    CJ

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Sad & touchy ;(

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    2 steps forward and never look back

  • 16 years ago

    by emad

    Very good job lady
    honestly this one makes me confused you make readers live the event... sometimes it's better to let the steps lead you coz the heart never die but has a rest !!!
    it's very very nice one

  • 20 years ago

    by NiCoLe

    I really like this one nice work its sounds like sum1 has hurt you i hope your ok Nicole XoXo

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