How I Feel

by Erika   Nov 15, 2005


When i don't have you,
I want you.
When you're not mine,
I want to be yours.
When i see you with someone else.
I want that someone else to be me.
When I'm not yours I see that special thing,
that that I love about you,
That thing that made me fall in love with you,
and I just wish I could be yours again.
I wish I could be with you,
so you could hold me close,
and love me like you used to :'(

*****This was originally written by my good friend, Cindie Baehr! I Changed it up a little to fit my perspective of how i feel, so just tell me what you think!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brett

    U there?

  • 18 years ago

    by Brett

    Hey eriko jospehine ;) what's up?

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    This was good short but good. i know just how you feel, Al

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Diaz

    I think its good, for me, it cuts a little close to home and that's alright to me because any poem that can make me feel anything at all is something worth reading =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Like all of the things you write it is great