I Can't Feel You

by Amber   Nov 16, 2005


I can't feel you by my side.
It's just me on this lonely ride.

I have no shoulder to cry on,
it's like you're completely gone.

I feel you no more,
my hand, you let go.

My love for you is still there.
You're just no longer here.

Your feelings are all I want,
but your heart is what you taunt.

I wanna be with you forever.
Go with you wherever.

But you are no longer here.
You don't even care.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    Wow, great piece here. The emotions going is truly heartfelt. It feels like this piece is coming straight out from the heart, I really don't hope so, it's so sad and full of pain. Oh, what am I saying, contradicting myself. lol. I see that there's some rhyming here which I think makes the emotions even stronger. Nice write! =D

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