Backstabber!

by Blutonium Boy   Nov 16, 2005


I was cheated, oh yes I was,
I was cheated, and cheated because,
People aren't concerned with what one feels,
Emotions are all people like to steal.

You see my friend it's as simple as this,
It all started with just one kiss,
My heart was lost in the deep abyss,
Now I contemplate if I even exist.

I saw the light, oh yes I did,
I did but peek, and my face I hid.
Your lips did lock on another's cheek,
And what a sigh did escape as a squeak.

If pleasure is all you ever see,
Then I sourly pity thee,
So when I leave do not shed a tear
Reach down to my heart and feel the spear.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    Wow that was awesome!!! it twas very very well written... I cant even comment on the commas lol (Which I do often) so again thats evern better good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Wow.... really powerful, you're words work perfectly and it reads really well. I like the story you've used, it has alot of meaning.
    5/5

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    The only thing I don't like are the o yes I did parts.. which means I like everything else about it.. and between you and me: that never happens!

  • 18 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Wow great poem! loved the structure and the flow...but yeh, would of been kwl if it ws maybe a little bit longer. jesxx

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    AMAZING POEM... TOO GOOD
    TOO DEEP
    5/5
    LOVE
    AMY

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