I Didn't Want It To Be Him

by Cuddles   Nov 16, 2005


I can see my prince in my mind
in all his shining glory,
riding on a white stallion...
In my dreams that is my story.
In truth my prince is an average guy
except he's a lot more crazy.
Once when we were hanging out...
Nevermind-the details are a little hazy.
He's got this amazing smile
and his eyes are like stars in the night sky.
They twinkle at me with such tenderness
I never want us to say goodbye.
With him I either laugh or want to cry.
Life alternates between Heaven and Hell.
People wonder about the mystery behind my joy,
though who he is I'll never tell.
I love the way his voice caresses my soul
and I hear angels begin to sing "Sweet Cherubim".
Out of all the guys that I could want,
I never imagined that I'd want him.

(c) Mary Barren

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Sounds like love! I really enjoyed this, it's so sweet and straightforward, in particular this line captured me 'I love the way his voice caresses my soul' its completely perfect and flawless. I like how you round it off in the ending aswell, linking everything back up together. Awesome stuff :)

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMemoriex

    I loved this one, cuddles! Perfect rhyming and the words just moved me.. =) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Holy cow... I don't even know what to say. You are so talented, and I loved this poem... Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Good poem i havea poem liek this sorta its called MY Destiny...anywasy thanxs for your gorgeosu comments! Yess i kow God has implanted me wit a talenta and i use it for him and to its fullest extent! is being descriptive bad? casue i always am its in my bloood i use it all the time. And as for "I'm almost wondering if you write better then i do?" YEaa i dont kno you're good..and your 18 i am only 16 so yeaa probably not. we'll see lol..though i think ur good. by the wya if you give me topics or a title i could write any poem..if you ahve anythign in mind just let me kno hunn! keep reading my poems! lol love xxLISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I kno what you mean...we're blinded from the start..we thik thsi kinda guy is jsut a friend until we find out beneath it all theres more to it...more to him. its amazing..inspiring..love it!! LISSA XOX

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