Trapped

by master of shadow   Nov 18, 2005


Shouting, yelling, hate,
the fighting, pain and blood,
this house's curse,
the way we can't all get on,
they're fighting again,
I hide away,
shouting,
yelling,
hitting,
I can't take this anymore,
cannot watch this,
watch my family destroy one another,
had enough,
so I leave,
walk out the door,
at the edge of town i look back,
over the silence town,
toward the calm sea,
from here no one could tell,
tell what lies in that house,
see the pain and suffering,
know of that hell,
as I turn away,
a thought comes over me,
"I escaped",
but what now?
I have no where to go,
I take one last look,
look toward freedom,
down the long silent road,
over the empty wasteland,
as barren and empty as i feel,
I long to walk over it,
ti leave this place,
but I cannot,
I have to go back,
nowhere else to go,
but for now I'll stay here,
and imagine I could leave,
imagine that I could be free.

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  • 18 years ago

    by *~Emma~*

    I can relate to this poem so much...you have such talent, i really liked this part
    I take one last look,
    look toward freedom,
    down the long silent road,
    over the empty wasteland,
    as barren and empty as i feel,
    I long to walk over it,
    ti leave this place,
    but I cannot,

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Wow I cant relate, thx for r/c on my poem

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Good poem. I often have that thouht " What if i would go" Leave and go somewhere else. And I realise, that I can't just go away, but just thinking of what I might be able to do, relaxes me sometimes. Nice poem. Excellent. And also thanks for your comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    Wow, this is relatable for a lot of people, you can touch people deeply with this one.
    I think you did an amazing job, transforming emotion in to words. The beauty is indeed not lossed.

  • 18 years ago

    by junior8forever

    Wow thats so good and so true omg thats hella good i gave u a 5 that poem really is good

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