Don't Go!

by Mezmeryz   Nov 21, 2005


We had the good times and the bad.
Throughout the clock chimes we stuck together.
You were my best friend and I was yours.
So why did you leave? Whyd you even bother?

You promised me youd always be there for me,
Although I promised you that too,
You never even gave me the chance.
You just went and left me blue.

Dear friend, dont you see?
I understand you had to go,
But you went so quick, didnt give me
The chance, to even say- Dont go!

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Daze

    Great poem, again reminds me of me anf my freind, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe im sry ur friend left. good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Gretchen

    That was sad and it really touched me. I agree I would change one of the "go"s to something else. Other than that Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    Thats was a sad one i really hope use make up 5/5 great job

    keep it up!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    I wish if i can email this to a so called friend.. but life doesnt always go my way .. i love ur poem ..its touching