It\'s My Time To Break

by AhmadAfaneh   Nov 21, 2005


Now i look back to what I've made
To all that smiles that i did fake
I've seen my life as it faded
So i knew that it's my time to break

I've got to face the whole world alone
with no help... no one beside me at all
I knew i am gonna fail and i am gonna fall
So my last pray was what i tone

All I wanted is a hand beside mine
So for a long time i did pine
But there was no use of my wail
because that hand didn't give me a sign

I've been in so many long sleepless nights
Then i got tired of all that endless fights
I didn't know what's wrong and what's right
And i realized that I am dying from the inside

They put me alone in the battle of life
To fight...and stay alive

In that battle nothing could bring me down
Except my loneliness that made me drown

At least I've tried but i couldn't win
I suffered without making a sin
And I've seen my soul getting dim
SO I KNOW NOW THAT IT'S MY TIME TO SAY ... GOODBYE

The_Lonesome_89@hotmail.com
Ahmed_Afanah@yahoo.co.uk

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I really liked this poem, because it was so well written, i love all your poems, keep writing
    xx
    love Tara xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Hey there.. great poem u have.. i loved your ending.. all your poems always i stir my my emotions.. stay strong alright.. there will be that angel one day who'd make u feel like u've never felt before, u'd give up the world for her.. until then you'll have to wait until she finds you.. Don't give up cuz i know ur a strong guy.. i'll always be there if u need someone to talk to or anything so keep writting your great poems.. i'll be waiting to read your next work.. much love.

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    Pz dont we all care about you
    this was so sad but i know how you feel i can help you if you want me to just e mail me at abradley89@hotmail.com im always here to talk and i will listen

    andrea

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Very nice... full of emotion, i can relate in way. It read well and your choice of words are good.
    5/5

    Thanks for your commeny, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

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