These Tears Wander

by FlawlesslyTarnished   Nov 26, 2005


These tears wander beyond anywhere possible..
beyond any reason of belief
any reason of thought
These tears just wander down my fragile cheeks
unable to stop these tears
I watch them drip n drip
as my body grows weak
What else to do?
I want to give up, but i cant
My heart refuses, although
I keep on fighting
I lose.

My fights grow weaker
nd my soul becomes dark
My body is stiff
nd my heart is torn
No way to mend, no way to heal
Nothing is left, no one..

Living is useless
nd there's no place
that's meant for me
I'm being torn, inside-out
I'm screaming
nd my cries for help
are only heard
by no one but me..

This cold lonely world
has killed me inside
nd so i take this blade
All ready to die...

**This isn't very good, but thanks for reading and please vote and comment, thanks again**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I actually liked this,it was filled with emotion. You havea bunch of 'nd' instead of 'and's and, there's also 'drip n drop' which would be better and drip and drop.
    In the beginning the lines were longer, but I think I still liked it and it flowed well.

    I don't know why you'd think it's not as good as the rest, the 'structure'needs some work, but the actual words and meaning... are amazing. you did a wonderful job with this darling

    5.5

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