Hate

by master of shadow   Nov 26, 2005


I used to feel guilty,
Like it was all my fault,
Felt like I caused it all,
All I did was wrong,
The fights,
The arguing,
The drinking,
The pain,
I thought I caused all this,
Thought I destroyed their lives,
Then the realization hit me,
And guilt turned to hate,
Hate for what they are,
Hate for what they do,
The fighting,
The shouting,
The hitting,
The drinking,
The pain,
The blood,
Hate for what they have become,
Hate for all they have done,
Hate for all they do,
For what they have caused,
For what I have become.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wonderful work, you have so much talent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This was another amazing poem by an amazing poet. I would have to say there was alot of anger in this poem. I mean it sucks sometimes one little thing you do wrong you'll have friends hating you. That's like me I finally got my boyfriend (Shawn) that i love so much and we were hanging out on a saturday which i thought but instead we planned on a sunday and i told my friend on that saturday i couldn't go to the mall because i was hanging out with shawn. Now she doesn't talk to me because i broke plans with her. Now it makes me feel like a no body because now it makes me feel i have no friends and that i am a bad person. Maybe i am and this poem explains to everyone the good and the bad about friends and why they might hate someone so much. amazing job once again. maybe my story and your poem didn't match up but it seemed like a story to tell from a poem like this. keep it up keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Reem O

    Luved your poem, i luv the way u put ur feelingz on ur poems, thanx for commenting on mine

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    WOW I can relate to that,,,,, im adding you to my favs BTW

    ~Natalie~

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Hey great poem and very touching..keep it up!!:)
    excellent flow too.
    xxx
    plz try comment/rate mine.
    thanx
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