When To Draw The Line

by Josh   Nov 28, 2005


What does one feel
How do they know
When everything they feel
Tells them to let go
When do they draw that last painful line
To let go of love is not right, its a crime
Though the time that you had with that special one
Was so short and to think that its over, its done
To feel what is felt when you yearn for another
Its a feeling that could make you choose her over your brother
Cause not to act on what one feels
Is to break a commitment to ones own self
And when you get to that point you know you need help
What are the signs that one has to see
To give up and show that she doesn't love me....

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, the rhyming was very good josh.
    I liked this poem.especially the 4 first lines were very good.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I like this a lot, Josh. You are a very good writer and this is an awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Hmm Excellent work. You are a very talented writer. I love your poems. I can get lost within it. Very good work. Keep it up ;) Lotsaa love, take care Josh, and keep writin please, I would love to read more :)