Silent End-

by lostlllsoul   Nov 29, 2005


The rain was drizzling silently
Seemingly dejected by the sky
As if pleading for forgiveness
Sensing the end draws nigh

Standing in solitary
Waiting for him to come
Trembling from the cold
As her body turned numb

Finally he appeared,
His lips trembling with disdain.
Explaining how it wasn't meant to be,
Why their relationship caused pain.

Ever so softly she felt her heart shatter,
As bosom of their love is being rived.
With the mentation of never seeing him again,
There was no way her soul could have survived.

Loosing their last moments together,
He told her to take care.
Right there he sent her taxied home,
His heart full of despair.

Silent tears he cried,
All drowned by the pouring rain.
Thinking about his hidden enigma,
That burned his every vein.

Cancer ignited his painful journey,
The thoughts of telling her tore him down.
It wasn't two years until he left this world,
That was when this diary she found.

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  • 17 years ago

    by missy

    Best poem I read today. That was really something and you spoke of a subject so touching and awwwhhhh it was awesome.

  • 18 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    Nice one :D i love it .. full of emotions , nice story , and good use of language .... keep it up !!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    5/5 wicked poem mate keep it up..you are real good with poems..i just wish i could write like dat :(.
    newyz keep up the great work!:)
    xxx
    plz coment mine too!
    thankz m8!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    You have the mind girl...as well as the heart...if you get what I mean...to write such wonderful poems...well...this turns out awesome...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Klumzy

    This is a great poem. I have just one thing to ask (and tell). I noticed in the poem you said she. So was this poem not based on something that happened to you? Or were you just referring to yourself as she? Because if you were just writing something that didn't happen to you, then i suggest you change that and you write something that you have more expierience with. That way you will have more inspiration and you will turn your great poem into an exellent poem.

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