It hurts

by t. h a l l i d a y *   Dec 3, 2005


My smiles are gone and so are you.
My tears come out, nothing better to do.
I pray all night that you'll be okay.
"Let her be strong" is all i can say.
Your cute little smile, your cute little walk.
The way that you laugh the way that you talk.
The way you say " It hurts i wanna go home."
It tares my heart open, your really gone.
It hurts when i see you there, in your hospital bed.
"It hurts!! I don't feel well."
Thats all that you said.
Your too young for these problems.
Your only 3 years old.
Your lying there alone.
first boiling hot, then freezing cold.
With tubes in your arms, and tears on your cheeks.
Your all alone, and your crying "Why me?"
So while you are gone.
Everything will be okay.
I love you cutie.
I love you more with each passing
day.

--- Please comment

This poem is dedicated to my niece lily! She is 3 years old, and has a life threatening illness... But i know she'll make ... she has too!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    That was so sad but really cute at the same time. I hope that she feels better soon! nicely writen~

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissy

    Damn this poem is sad. i have a neice too and shes 4 yrs old idk wat i would do if anything happened to her. good poem i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    All of your poetry is depressing, but yet full of talent. Bravo. Hopefully,your niece will get better soon. Such situations are very painful, as you have portrayed in your poem. I sincerely hope everything goes well. Again, good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written and expressed poem, yuo really expressed the emotions in a powerful manor. welld one.

    5/5

    hope your neice will be ok

  • 18 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    This is amazing, keep writing, i think you really have a talent for this!

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