by t. h a l l i d a y * Dec 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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My smiles are gone and so are you. |
by Danielle
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That was so sad but really cute at the same time. I hope that she feels better soon! nicely writen~ |
by Krissy
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Damn this poem is sad. i have a neice too and shes 4 yrs old idk wat i would do if anything happened to her. good poem i like it |
by HansRik
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All of your poetry is depressing, but yet full of talent. Bravo. Hopefully,your niece will get better soon. Such situations are very painful, as you have portrayed in your poem. I sincerely hope everything goes well. Again, good job! |
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Very well written and expressed poem, yuo really expressed the emotions in a powerful manor. welld one. |
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This is amazing, keep writing, i think you really have a talent for this! |