Perfect

by David Paul   Dec 5, 2005


You made me believe that heaven exists,
And a piece of it's here with me,
Because before I only believed,
In things that I could see.

But now I know there's something more,
That made me fall in love,
And someone down here as perfect as you,
Could have only been sent from above.

Perfection is something impossible to reach,
But I know god gave it to you,
No matter what mistakes you say you make,
I still love everything you do.

I'm perfectly miserable yet perfectly fine,
Being your friend always there,
And talking to me about that guy,
Makes me sad but I still care.

I don't know exactly what to write down,
To tell you how I feel,
I just want you to know that in all reality,
My love is perfectly real.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow i really liked this poem! it was so heartfelt and just so sad but perfect at the same time! it was so well written and flowed amazingly... you did a terrific job writing this nice job and a 5/5!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Nice job david. Liked the words and the flow and hope to see your band play at that talent show thing next month.

    ~Matt~

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    What a beautiful poem, just giving this to the lady in the poem would be enough I think. This sounds like something my Fiance could have written a few months before we got together, just for the subject. The flow and rhyming was "perfect" however, the rhyme of love with above is quite typical and over used in love poetry. I think it was the emotion you put into this that pulled it off, because in all honesty there isn't much that is very original, but that doesn't matter too much the emotion IS there. The fourth stanza, second line didn't make sense...maybe something like "Being your friend I'm always there" would sound better. It's up to you anyway.
    Keep writing I enjoyed this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very good poem David...I liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Well at least you and her can talk right? So you are so happy but there sadness because you don’t know if she will ever feels the same. I guess it’s like watching an angel...it’s so perfect you feel happy but also so sad. This poem puts it across real well and I hope everything works out for you...

Read All Comments (5)

More Poems By David Paul