by мσÑιтυÑαм Dec 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Her eyes were watery as she gasped for air |
by Jin
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Very good job..... gave me goosebumps..... keep up the good work! lots of snaps w/ 3 thumbs up..hehehe |
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Aww, this is so moving. really sad, but wonderfully written:)xxx |
by mookoo
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^^awesome-ful poem!! |
by lee
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Aww, that is actually really sad. but its a really good poem. 5/5 |
by Melissa
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Wow, this is so sad, but written beautifully! Great write! |