Don't blame the guilty

by Kirsty   Dec 8, 2005


Another night wasted
One more pointless turn
I wanted you to keep my secret
I wanted you to learn

I didn't want to risk it
It was better left unsaid
Your persistence swayed through me
It's your fault that you're dead

If only you were silent
You pushed me to the top
I told you not to spit at me
I told you, you should stop

But you can't change what happens
My temper raises high
I feel my pulse's pounding
It's stitched within your lie

And as I seize the moment
I slide out of control
I wanted you to suffer all
So I run to get a pole

In just one hit you've fallen
With the blood flows out consists
I always thought I trusted you
Your just another to my list

I hoist your body upwards
Remember everything you said
You lay amongst my collection
But it's your fault that you're dead

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Hey kirsty! that poem was really... high quality :P lol... i loved it ... emy's sitting next to me she says hi... i'm guessing ... well great poem i have to hide in the corner and scream now...

    Mwah xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovesick 4 Jesus

    Whoa thats really...really...chilling, lol but very well written. I like it, Trisha

  • 18 years ago

    by Josh

    Whoa!!! watch out for Kristy. Really good writing, I'm just scared of the thing that drove you to write it....
    Much Luv,

    Josh

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    So here we see the dark side of you ? =P hehe. Very well done kirsty, I absolutely loved it very much. It's a very good poem, just like all your other poems. But this one is different. Which makes it so dam perfect. Very well done(doesn't know what else to say) Take care hun -xxx- love ya

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Bloody brillient, lol, get it. i'm sorry, i make stupid jokes like that sometimes. But i did really love your poem. if i could vote it any highter i would. it was so creative and well...dark, lol. i loved the way it was worded. i can't pick a favorite stanza because, well, they're all as good as eachother. i look forward to reading more

    Brad

    P.S. i'm putting you on my favorite

    P.P.S its so good to finally meet someone from the UK, everyone seems to be from the US, lol

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