Message from the girl

by Kirsty   Apr 20, 2006


It's been so long now Mummy
I really really miss you
But Daddy said you're safe now
Why won't you open your eyes Mummy?
I've got a secret surprise Mummy
I learnt how to ride my bike today
I can stay on it all the time
I miss it when you push me
It felt like I was flying Mummy
But Daddy can't stop crying Mummy

Daddy takes me shopping for you
To get a rose on mothers day
I used to make you orange juice
Remember you drank it in bed Mummy?
I still hear you sing me to sleep in my head Mummy
At nights I can't close my eyes at all
Just in case I never open them like you
But Daddy holds me in his arms so tight
Just like you used to when I was scared Mummy
Daddy says your watching cause you care Mummy

When are you coming home Mummy?
Heaven can't be to far from here
I try not to let myself cry
I know you wanted me to be strong Mummy
But you've been away for so long Mummy
Daddy carries your picture with him everywhere
I always answer the phone now
Daddy said you wouldn't be calling though
But I love you Mummy and I can hear you breathe Mummy
Daddy said I could talk to you whenever I need Mummy
I miss you Mummy

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  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    Wow
    just reading through this makes me want to cry
    you've written this really well, asthough you're actually the child
    the part about learning to ride a bike is so cute
    great jobxxx.

  • 18 years ago

    by aimee

    That is so emotional and beautiful, I like the way you made it so frabrent and wonderful n sad at the same time. good job

    xxo
    love stained sheetz

  • 18 years ago

    by aimee

    That is so emotional and beautiful, I like the way you made it so frabrent and wonderful n sad at the same time. good job

    xxo
    love stained sheetz

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Awww...thats so touching & sad...
    Very well done...it really touched me
    Keep writting!!!!
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Awe baby, this is such a sad poem=*(

    I love how you describe this through the eyes of a child. And the way this child sees it, feels it and thinks.

    It's a very powerfull write hun. I loved it. FANTASTIC!

    Lotsaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-