by Boy Dec 8, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
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I am tired and close my |
by Marc Ortiz
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It's a good poem but I like your other poems better - sorry xD I think to improve this you need to put more punctuations :) it flowed well, good job |
by Cyma Khan
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Gr8 poem |
by Boy
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Good work carry on!!!! |