Why should i live why should i die

I didn't exactly enjoy this poem very much. It was short to the point of where it seemed you hadn't given any thought at all. The repitition in it was the biggest problem though, and it would be alot better if you described why you are thinking this way. I know you can do alot better!

I really enjoyed reading this poem! it has alot of emotion.. great writing.. =]

Really like this poem---its so true how there are so many questions in this world eith no answer---

Questions without answers are never fun to deal with, but that is why we live, to find the answers, to learn, to grow and to gain understand. Never surrender to uncertainty, fight through it and survive it's enticing power.

-Tainted

A lot of emotion is held within this peice, and expressed very strongly to make a very well written powerful peice of poetry.

5/5