Your Poem

by Spirit   Dec 10, 2005


There is a poet inside all of us
Both big kids and small
The trouble is finding what your good at writing
It may be sad, dark, funny, or all

You may not think you're the best
And all you poems are bad
That's all right, it's fine
Just don't be sad

Cause' there is someone out there
Maybe more than one
Who'll love your poem as mush as you
Than your poems done

Getting a poem finished may not be easy
Just remember write what you feel
Write who you are because
True poems from your heart are real

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  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I think that this poem should be read be poet who are down because they think their work is not good. I love the way you are inspiring people to continue writing. really good job xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    You may not think your the best
    You may not think YOU'RE the best
    as in you are
    For the then your poems done line I didn't understand it. Maybe THAN your poems done? And for cause' I think it would be *'*cause instead but that doesn't really bug me so splah. It's pretty good otherwise. For the writing from what you feel thing I don't believe we have to do that because the majority of my poems do not come from past experiences or emotions and I think I do quite will with them. It's actually harder for me to write about something that's happened. For something that hasn't it's easy because you can change it around to whatever you want. :) I liked that your poem was about...well poems! :) 4.

  • 16 years ago

    by silvershoes

    This poem is decent, but it seems rushed. There are lots of errors and some lines barely make sense. However, I get the topic, and I agree with what you've written. Very inspirational :)

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    EXACTLY!! i know what you are saying! many pple think they cant do it but they r soooo wrong

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Ohh that is so true : ]] I definantly like what you wrote about but besides that the flow was good and everything penned together nicely. Great job!