No More Tears

by Jackie Marie   Dec 10, 2005


She always screams and yells
That is all you'll ever hear
It's about anything and everything
I just stand there
With eyes full of fear

My brother was sent away
Said to be gone for a few years
I just want him to come home
Maybe make her happy
So there will be no more tears

Dad doesn't come around
Barely takes time to call
Doesn't care that I am his daughter
It's alright though
I try to forget about it all

When will it all get better
When will the tears stop falling
Why does it all have to go wrong
Who can make it better
When will happiness start calling

© 2005 Jay Marie

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really enjoyed this, and I can really relate to the stanza about your father.
    I liked the imagery and I found the wording very good.

  • 19 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Nice rhymes and flow. Not one of your best but still good.

    p.s. said I would do them all!
    definately going in favourites.

  • 19 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Nice rhymes and flow. Not one of your best but still good.

    p.s. said I would do them all!
    definately going in favourites.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem rocks, very sad, keep up the great work 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This isn't your best, but it is pretty good...

    I'm not sure really how to critize it or what to say, forgive me.

    xDarkSuicidex

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