Comments : The Drunk Driver

  • 14 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    I loved it it was great you are a great writer keep up the good work!!!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by leinhart

    This is great! keep writing!

  • Oh my god this poem is amazing and i can feel the emotion behind it...i love all of ur work and i know that u know that...well 5/5 keep up the great work....5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow this is so good! i like it a lot...its very sad. it makes you think bout the terrible things that can happen becasue of one mistake. great as usual!

  • 14 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg had me in tears!:( reminds me of those TAC ads..
    Great poem hun, u have talent thats for sure xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Crazyyyyyyyy poem. I know this girl, that was driving her boyfriend to school on his birthday and she crashed and he died. She blames herself all the time...but he died for not wearing his seatbelt. Life can be so cruel.


  • 14 years ago

    by Ben

    I am impressed, you defintly have some great talent and this poem sent a very strong message! Well done =)

  • 14 years ago

    by Shane

    An example of the harmful effects of drunk driving.
    A poem with a lesson?
    Who can complain?

  • 14 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Amazing!! I wanted to cry! You write soo this a true story? I hope not! Keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by dora

    0mg what a t0uching pice. w0w that was very well written!!!!! 0mg.. g0od j0b 0n it darl!! very well written!!
    l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

  • 14 years ago

    by Nicole Jacobsen

    OH MY GOD.This poem is read it and don't expect that at the end. It's so sad. But I know alot of people that've been in these situations. Love it. I gave it a *5*.

  • WoW.. that was an excellent poem i so didnt expect that that it was really really good!!!!... anyway you have a talent thats for sure.. check some of my poems out.XoX Nat XoX

  • 14 years ago

    by Nikkey

    Your poem was WONDERFUL!!keep up the good work!!5!!

  • 14 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow, that was a winderful poem. 5'5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Such a sad piece .... but over the holidays it will hopefully carry a strong message to many ...

    Great write , packs a powerful punch ....

  • 14 years ago

    by Kimeko Lancaster

    Omg!! this poem was amazing. Great job 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by dancer_chick

    Wow! That was a really great poem. I am glad you wrote that. That happened to my friend not to long ago. And is a very serious thing. Keep up the good work, and keep writing poems.

  • 14 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    Wow! This was sucha good poem! I really liked it...great flow. keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah

    Omg...that was so sad. My mouth just dropped when I read the last line. I actually got butterflies. I have no idea why. That was a really good poem and I loved the way you wrote it. Awesome job! 5/5


  • 14 years ago

    by Hannah

    Your really good to keep the rhyming going, and i think it was a good story..and yet also a great poem.
    loved it