Standing In The Rain Again,

I very much liked the way you expressed the mix of emotions which are bound to the unfortunate end of this love. Smiling and laughing seems for me an absolutely great contrast to crying and tears in such a way all the things we do when a relationship breaks down, we cry on our own and love and smile in public. The simplicity of the structure of your poem gives your words much more intensity and especially the last two verses stand still in the room and animate the reader to remember senses who everyone felt before . And that's exactly , I think, what makes a good poem, it should touch people deeply in the heart and animate them to think about the work for a while.
Again, a great work.

Lots of love
Sabine

So sad, but faith is thrown into the mix to add hope! I love this piece, so short but perfectly written! Loving your poetry!

Short but sweet, i really enoyed reading this poem! you've expressed yourself well in these few select words! well done.....luv em