I lost her

by Tim Bradshaw   Dec 13, 2005


The phone rang late one night,
I couldn't believe my ears.
They said my love was hit by a car,
And I exploded into tears.

They rushed her to the hospital,
That's where I seen her.
I wanted to take her pain away,
I wanted to be the cure.

They said she wasn't conscious,
But I knew she heard me.
I told her everything would be okay,
As I prayed upon my knees.

I sat beside her for two days,
Waiting for her to open her eyes
So we could talk one more time,
And she could watch the sun rise.

The doctor came and said it's time,
They said sorry but it's true.
Its time to pull the plug on her,
It was the only thing to do.

So I said please let me,
It's the least that I could do.
Baby rest in peace I'll be there soon,
And don't ever forget that I'll always love you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    HEARTBREAKING!!!! this was really heart felt...i could feel my heart breaking with yours!!! i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Theo

    Dude this poem struck me as depressing. If i ever lost my g/f like that then i would be histerical. Good poem tim, it creates emotion and gets a rise out of the audience. Rate some of my poetry. Peace
    [Theo]

  • 18 years ago

    by franky

    That was really good

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow, that was a beutiful poem, im still shoked and crying. tears down my face once again. breathless. that was one of THE best poems i've read and u no y because its heartfelt and written by sooo much passion in a moment of pain captured so well. i hope this isnt true but if it is i feel for u and hope u better. well gd luck and take care. a defenite 5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    This is so sad. i am so so sorry. very touching poem. very well written.

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