Us

by gasping for air   Dec 14, 2005


You and i...
we've come a long way..
from where we started
we've beat the odds
and all of the expectations
we've come so far
gone through so much
and all the while
you've gone and loved me
more and more
each day
never giving up on me
never giving in
when it was the easy way out
the simple thing to do
you've loved me through think and thin
and all the while
you've done your best
to make me happy
you've corrected your mistakes
and loved me with all your heart
opened up your soul and let me in
we've had rough times
that's to be expected
but we've made it
we've held on and made it work
you're a wonderful man
and i hope that it is i
who spends the rest of her life with you
i want to grow old with you zachary
and live life with you by my side
i want to spend eternity
with you and only you
you are the love of my life
you are my haven, my savior
and i want you to hear this:
I love you with everything that i am
and more
I have done you wrong before
and for that i am truly sorry
But i will do my best for you
i won't let things be ruined
I love you,
more than i can ever say

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  • 18 years ago

    by junior8forever

    Wow girl,
    thats so good i read somee of your other poems
    i really like them
    there very cool and speical in there own way
    . u are really are good at writeing poems . i will be stopen in once in a while to see all ur new poems
    so u schould keep on writeing
    sorry for de spelling errors

    *courtney*

  • 18 years ago

    by joseph

    It is ok but wrong format.

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Another Good Write. Again I believe punctuation especiallycould help in this piece simply to make you words stronger. Keep on writing, you've released your emotion deep into these pieces.
    --Broken.

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Woah. I'm in love with a guy named zach....how weeeeeeird lol. sorry....

    Cute poem. I'm not a very country person but it reminds me of a shania twain song....Still Together or something like that. VERY cute. Adorable actually.

    Great job!

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