Oh girl, this is really good, but dont go thru with it. life gets better, u just gotta wait, i'm always here to talk if you need me, hugs-hayley

Beautiful! Poor girl... :( really sad

Aww hun, it’s pretty sad. I hope you’re all right at the moment and no type of pain or sadness has made you write this. The last two lines were my favourite as they end the poem really well; it’s good but is a poem that a lot of people write about. Still, 5/5 though

Aww, what a sad poem, touched my heart. keep up writing these great poems.
tara xxx

Excellent job! I have felt like doing that before..But I try to stay strong about everything! And I hope you stay strong too! You did very well on this and I liked the style of it too

5/5 :)

Moving, well-stated and utterly heartbreaking. A piece of powerful sorrow done with a touch of beauty. Well done indeed.

Good work. Very sad. You seem to put a different sort of spin on this kind of poem. You don't just rant and yell like most of them. Yours seems to add an extra something.

Fantastic! So true...you've captured all of the emotions that one would have in this situation. I wish you the best and hope things get better. Remember, if you ever need to talk, add me if you have msn messenger: tennischick14@hotmail.com

A really sad, but fantastic poem! Interesting idea! It couldn't be written any better! An excellent write!

Omg! this poem was so good! I could totally relate. You are a great writer, keep it up. 5/5

Aww hunni..that actually made me cry...please don't go and kill urself..i ve thought of it a million times and i haven't done it yet...somthing always seems to stop me..but i hope everything gets better....and if u want to you can talk to me..

That was a really good poem! I know what its like to feel like that. It's a struggle i feel all the time. But you just gotta keep your head up. : )

-Lauren Lee

I hope this will not be real...

Hey! this was an awsome poem!!!! but u know whats even awsomer!!!! my last name is " Stelmack" and we use to spell our last name like urs !! what if we were related!!! lol thats kinda freaky...but also kinda cool!!! well anyways yes your poem was really good!!!! keep up the good work!

Great poem i loved it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love it... its very good. i did this b4 but i was saved from the overdose cause my boyfriend helped me through.. keep up the good work 5/5

Wow another speachless poem i must say. this is so sad but yet so good. I hope this is not ever going to be true. But i could understand you felt anger and stuff , decided to write this. Sometimes i feel like that and i'll write and post it on here, see what people would think of it. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Wow.. what a sad letter/poem i know it came from your heart and your bottled up feelings.. i hope you're okay =).. this is a well written poem with so many powerful words and strong meaning to it.. keep up the great work =)

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Wow, Im all choked up inside. Thats amazing along with all your other work. I wanted to write something like this and i couldnt have wrote it any better than yours. Great work

Juls

Though I seldom picked up on suicide poems, but this one touchesd me deeply. It's with the way you wrote this poem, it is written in a letter style poem, so it seems like you're addressing it to the readers, and it makes the readers feel for you, the pain and all. Though I the poem is lengthy, it keeps to going to the end. Nice job. =)